Ben D asked:
1. all the course credits that are accumulated can be transferred to a 4 year college.
1. all the course credits that are accumulated can be transferred to a 4 year college.
2. going to a two-year college can save a great deal of money in tuition and other fees.
3. if the college is nearby,there ae also significant savings in everyday living expenses.
could this be my thesis.
Going to a two-year college is a great way to start your college education.
Patrice
February 11th, 2009 at 10:45 pm
Let’s see does the thesis give the subject and your opinion on it?
Subject: two-year colleges
Opinion: are a great way to start your education
Yep
Do all three of your main points support your thesis?
Yep
So yes, your thesis works.
February 13th, 2009 at 12:55 pm
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The first one you kinda skipped the first one you should say transferring to save money.
The first one you kinda skipped the first one you kinda skipped the first one you should say transferring to twoyear college is great way to save money.